ki oar cole Noah J here from G.M.S just like to say that this is really good a couple of things that you could do to make this better are maybe do the background a different color so then it draws people to it put some more facts in like where it was originally from or how many eggs one mother could have other than that good job see you at cubs or school
How are you doing at home during this lock down? I am sure there are lots of fun things happening! This is a good poster that you have created to tell us all about Pheasants! Remember to check your spelling before you publish anything to your blog. Even at home make sure someone has checked it first! I was interested to see that they only live for 3 years! That is not very long! I look forward to reading more of your work over the next few weeks when we work from home!
ki oar cole
ReplyDeleteNoah J here from G.M.S just like to say that this is really good a couple of things that you could do to make this better are maybe do the background a different color so then it draws people to it put some more facts in like where it was originally from or how many eggs one mother could have other than that good job
see you at cubs or school
Hi Cole
ReplyDeleteHow are you doing at home during this lock down? I am sure there are lots of fun things happening!
This is a good poster that you have created to tell us all about Pheasants! Remember to check your spelling before you publish anything to your blog. Even at home make sure someone has checked it first!
I was interested to see that they only live for 3 years! That is not very long!
I look forward to reading more of your work over the next few weeks when we work from home!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)